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Three sunsets
Ride a humble stallion
of Immortal beauty
The problem with Haikus is that they don't really say a lotI have no idea how you as the author relate to the world around you, it's hard to get any deeper meaning out of it and it's to short :(But I LOVE the picture and the three lines that could be the begining of a beautiful poem :)
Sorry, lately this blog became a bit too egoistic. For me and my memories only... To explain what I ment I will add another Haiku:Haikus are easy But sometimes theydon't make sense Procarborator
The problem with Haikus is that they don't really say a lot
ReplyDeleteI have no idea how you as the author relate to the world around you, it's hard to get any deeper meaning out of it and it's to short :(
But I LOVE the picture and the three lines that could be the begining of a beautiful poem :)
Sorry, lately this blog became a bit too egoistic. For me and my memories only...
ReplyDeleteTo explain what I ment I will add another Haiku:
Haikus are easy
But sometimes theydon't make sense
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